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    My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

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    My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

    Post by Burning Rose on Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:44 pm

    Alrighty, here's a song I wrote. It's kinda, well, crummy, as the title states. But my inspiration for this song was an issue with this dude, so I went ahead and wrote it, and now posting it here. Verses are in red and chorus is in green. Here it is:



    Why Is This So Real?



    Sitting there, thinking bout it, ev'rything moves on.
    There you are, there I was, Baby now I'm gone.
    You were looking for me, why?
    You're the reason that I cry.
    Why is this so Real?


    Ev'ry time I see you, my heart skips a beat.
    Ev'ry time I'm near you, I just want to cry.
    Just thinking about all the things you do to me.
    Constantly asking myself why,
    Why is this so Real?



    The clock ticks by, so fast, so slow, til I see you.
    Sometimes I cry at the thought, welcome the dread.
    Repeatedly, feeling no life. Am I dead?
    Why is this so Real?


    Ev'ry time I see you, my heart skips a beat.
    Ev'ry time I'm near you, I just want to cry.
    Just thinking about all the things you do to me.
    Constantly asking myself why,
    Why is this so Real?


    I feel so empty,
    Why do I feel this way?
    I feel so lonely,
    Why is it real this way?

    Constantly begging for hope,
    I need someone to help me cope.....

    Cause you're the reason,
    I feel this way.
    You did nothing,
    Now I feel this way.

    Hope is ever comforting,
    But now I feel it, slipping away.....



    Ev'ry time I see you, my heart skips a beat.
    Ev'ry time I'm near you, I just want to cry.
    Just thinking about all the things you do to me.
    Constantly asking myself why,
    Why is this so Real?

    Ev'ry time I see you, my heart skips a beat.
    Ev'ry time I'm near you, I just want to cry.
    Just thinking about all the things you do to me.
    Constantly asking myself why,
    Why is this so Real?


    Why is this so Real?
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    Re: My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

    Post by Estrella on Sun Nov 16, 2008 4:13 am

    Wow, these lyrics are wonderful! I can't believe you don't think this is good. ;-;



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    Re: My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

    Post by Burning Rose on Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:36 pm

    I guess when you look at your own work, it doesn't seem as good the second time. I have a melody line for the song, but everytime I here it I seem to cringe a bit. Don't know why though.....
    Anyway's, I'm glad you like it Sarvani. Very Happy
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    Re: My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

    Post by Subaru7 on Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:02 am

    I've got a melody for this, I'll try and put it together soon and record it soon. I'll even try and sing it, but don't expect much from that.

    Should be in soon.
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    Re: My crummy music- Burning Rose/Xana

    Post by Burning Rose on Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:38 pm

    Alright, here is another one of my crummy works. This one is called 'Save me'.

    -Save Me


    As I go through life,
    day, by day.
    I gradually feel
    things blending the same.

    So I ask my,
    why is this?
    I need some relief,
    Some heavenly bliss.



    I find myself,
    being pulled away;
    By modern objects
    and earthly idols.
    And all I can say,
    Or do is this:

    I fall to my knees,
    And beg God, please.
    Oh my Lord, my God, my Savior,
    Please save me from me.



    Why is this so hard;
    To be a better part?
    Everywhere I go or look
    Constantly breaking, is my heart.

    Why is it like this,
    Something terribly amiss?
    I need something to help me cope,
    Some renewing Hope.



    I find myself,
    Being pulled away.
    By worldly objects
    And earthly idols.
    And all I can say,
    Or do, is this:

    I fall to my knees,
    And beg God, please.
    Oh, my Lord, my God, my Savior,
    Please save me, from me.



    And I fall to my knees,
    And beg God, please.
    Oh my Lord, my God, my Savior,
    Please save me from me.

    Please save me from me.
    Save me from me.
    Me from me.
    From me.
    Save me.......

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